Komentar Sajak Baju Kurung Merah Darah

Tinta Nissa' Yusof pada 4/14/2009 01:26:00 AM

14 April 2009

KOMENTAR SAJAK: BAJU KURUNG MERAH DARAH
(Karya : AINUNL MUAIYANAH SULAIMAN)

OLEH : NISSA' YUSOF


Baju Kurung Merah Darah
(Suara dari perkuburan cinta)

Warna kurungku merah darah
Disimbah dari hati yang kau tarah

Selendangku berbiku tajam
Ditenun dari janji yang kau rejam

Kerudungku bertenun benang rasa
Disulam dari kenangan yang bersisa

Aku hadir berwajah manis
Seluruh rasa telah ku sita
Kau menghulur bunga kemboja
Dari perkuburan cinta
Bunga itu ku kambus bersama talkin
Bisik cinta yang kau himpun untuknya

Aku memilih untuk setia
Di Perkuburan cinta ini

Ainunl Muaiyanah Sulaiman
17 Januari 09
Dewan Bahasa & Pustaka

Berita Harian (31 Januari 2009)


Sesebuah sajak yang menyebut ‘cinta’, tidak semestinya melibatkan cinta sesama manusia. Cinta adalah satu subjek yang sangat meluas maksudnya. Mungkin saja cinta dalam persahabatan, cinta pada ibu bapa, cinta agama, cinta negara atau apa-apa sahaja.

Sajak Baju Kurung Merah Darah ini dimulakan dengan gambaran warna kurung, selendang dan kerudung yang dikaitkan dengan hati, janji dan kenangan.

Tidak terlalu payah bagi pembaca untuk mencari makna tersiratnya, bermula dengan stanza satu,

warna kurungku merah darah
disimbah dari hati yang kau tarah

penyajak sudah mengungkapkan bahawa ini persoalan hati yang terluka. Begitu juga dengan baris-baris seterusnya yang menggambarkan perasaan kecewa. Penggunaan ‘kau’ dan ‘aku’ menggambarkan dua insan yang menjadi penggerak persoalan.

Kau menghulur bunga kemboja
dari perkuburan cinta

Dalam dua baris ini, jika kita berbalik pada persoalan 'hati' tadi, dapat kita gambarkan bahawa cinta ‘kau’ memang telah ‘mati’. Ini boleh dilihat dengan penegasan 'kau' menghulur kemboja dari kubur. Bunga kemboja dan kubur adalah imej yang selari. Bahkan kemboja juga digelar 'bunga kubur'.

Sajak ditutup dengan,

Aku memilih untuk setia
Di Perkuburan cinta ini

di sini juga jelas bahawa ‘aku’ memilih untuk setia, walaupun cinta ‘kau’ sudah tiada.

Secara keseluruhan, sajak ini melukiskan imej yang terang. Setiap imej dan erti dibawakan penyajak dengan berhati-hati. Pembaca tidak akan menemui persoalan kontra yang mengganggu.

Tetapi, mungkin akan lebih menarik jika ‘kau’ tidak menghulur kemboja, sebaliknya menghulur bunga lain. Penyajak akan memberi satu harapan lain kepada pembaca bahawa cinta itu tidaklah mati sepenuhnya (mati separuh?). Kadang-kala unsur pertentangan boleh menjadikan sesebuah sajak lebih menarik.

p/s: Apa barang nak setia kalau betul-betul sudah mati. Cari pengganti saja. Hehehe


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ainunL muaiyanah said...

Terima kasih nissa untuk komentar. peristiwa sajak itu bertulis, biar saya sendiri sahaja yang simpan. haha


Apa-apa pun, komentar yang bagus ya.

p/s : Siapa kata ada mahu setia kalau sudah mati. Mari kita cari pengganti. hehe

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